3 Things For Better Writing!


I’m sure I’ve blogged about this before but I can’t express how pleased I am with the class’ progression in writing over this year – the above picture is a short extract of a piece written by a year 4. I’ve been looking for that ‘magical’ thing that bumps up the style and ability of children’s writing and (putting my neck on the line here) I think I’ve found it!

We’ve worked really hard all year on three things:

  1. Sentence structure and demarcation.
  2. Purpose.
  3. Audience.

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What’s the point?

This first term has contained a real push, in our class, towards improving literacy. We’ve been working on descriptive writing in particular and I can confidently say everyone in the class has made some real progress. Recently, I’ve been encouraging the class to ask themselves “why am I even writing this?”

Purpose plays such a huge part in being able to write particular text types and mastering purpose means that features can easily be distinguished, and then used. Getting the kids to think about what they’re writing, and why they’re writing it in the first place, has made this much easier.

What’s better is I’ve not been sugar-coating any of the process and the children have reacted very well to this. Literacy ‘units’ (although we’re not using a particular scheme) follow a general set of steps:

  1. Introduce the type of writing (description, recount, persuade etc.)
  2. Figure out why anyone would write like this (what’s the point?)
  3. List the things in the writing.
  4. Practice using those things in different text types (so, for persuasion, we used advertisements, speeches, plain writing and letters).

Throughout these steps I’ve used words like purpose and features and the children now know exactly what they mean and can confidently pick texts apart.

Once the children figured out that the features were the things being put into success criteria they began to talk about the features they needed to write an effective piece for a particular purpose; showing an understanding that writing changes and being able to tell anyone why it does so!

This has got to be a better process than simply teaching children what’s needed for particular text types and trying to get them to remember.